Sunday, May 13, 2012

Peacock Woman

Peacock Woman
I know you try to blend in
but all eyes turn your way.
You're self conscious and proud at the same time
Oh, I wish I were you....

Your grace and beauty stun the crowd
an otherworldly essence
carries your spirit aloft,
not rooted in the earth like me...

Do you see only in color
so many shades getting in your way?
Are the rest of us black and white
or merely gray?

Masking eyes and talking hearts,
You're searching too; restless and vulnerable.
A conversation with the soul
renders all to beauty and time,
Maybe you're a bit like me.....


This is my entry for the Take A Word challenge "Peacock".  Imagery altered digitally from Dover books, Holliewood and Finecrafted designs at Deviant Scrap.  Poem by me- thoughts on beauty.

21 comments:

  1. I love your "Peacock Woman" and the poem is beautiful!

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  2. Gorgeous image and poetry! You're so talented, Lori!

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  3. She is amazing Lori.
    Wonderwonderful work. Love it. xoxo

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  4. this is gorgeous & the words ...:)

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  5. This is stunning Lori! And the poem is lovely.

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  6. fantastic poem, beautiful image!

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  7. Both the poem and your image are beautiful, Lori!

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  8. Stunning presentation and the bonus of your own writing, awesome work, Lori!

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  9. Poetry in words and pictures, not everyone gets such a feat. Congratulations on your talent and sensitivity.

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  10. AWEsome! and her dress seems to be formed by two long necks of peacocks...

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  11. This is AWESOME. What beautiful. Really stunning. Love this very much.
    Lovely greet
    Marja

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  12. WOW Lori, another very impressive art work, love the blurry look, your ideas are ever inspiring!
    Wish you a nice sunny week,
    xox Anja

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  13. Oh, Lori, this is super. Congratulations on the poem! Both it and your art are just wonderful!

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  14. Wonderful thoughts on beauty Lori! Both picture and poem are superb! xx

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  15. Super beautiful poem!! and LOVe peacock woman..also love the eye of the feather on the front of her body!. I once a had a dream/vision..where I was travelling inside the eye of the feather..this triggered that memory..she is like a beautiful dream-journey guide-goddess!! Beautiful..I love everything about her..she is glorious..mysterious..and fantastical...LOVE it!! i love everything you do Lori!
    Happy week ahead to you!
    Victoria

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  16. Gorgeous, Lori. The poem is wonderful. How talented you are!!!

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  17. Lori, you have blown me away with your beautiful peacock woman and the wonderful, original poem. I agree with Faye. You are so multi-talented.

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